Here's another free verse poem that I just came up with:
Slowly, the ocean waves are approaching
Preparing to attack the cliff with such force
Despite the pain, the cliff always stands
Hoping that some day nature's course will change
It's quite childish. While writing it I just focused on adding a bit of personification. Other then that, I just can't believe that the Winter Break is officially over. I could've definitely used another week to relax.
3 comments:
This is so cute! I really enjoyed it. Do you spend a lot of time writing poetry? You should try to get some published!
yes, i agree with ruby. great poem. your blog mark is 18/26. Not so good.
your new marks is 21/26. Not too many of your entries were uncounted, just 3 metaphor poems and the room by day/by night one. The ohter ones were counted. See you next week.
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